L.G use paragraphs to organise my ideas.

S.O.S use time connectives to order paragraphs e.g fishy finally

Fidget spinners

Mr Elder fidget spinners should be banned from school.Because kid play with them all day.And they don't do Maths Writing and Reading.Mr Elder kid play with fidget spinners all the time.Mr Elder you could banned fidget spinners because they are toys do you have a ideas to banned fidget spinners from school.

By Destany