L.G state + and - in a film review

Sos 2+

      2-

This was a cloud how help people.

This cloud is a speci cloud he is different

From the cloud’s he went into the city and

Put the fire out i like this story because the cloud help the

People and put out the fire.the fing i did not like was the dog.

Agr 4 to 20 rating out 9

           Taking flight

I liked this story because the boy

Is emagnatin being in space

And emagnating being in the jungli

I like This stroy is 5-11 riating out of 10

   Age 4 to 20.

            Turtle

Topic-Turtle

Purposes- save turtl

Audience-Room 6

Intro The turtles can be color like blue

1 Turtles can be all colors and sizes.The turtles have more food and water as people have food and water to.

2People have two arm and two leg.

Turtle are the best you can all have one .People need to save turtle.because they are deing.

3 The turtle are all sizes.Turtle live in the sea.People go to the sea.Turtle can have 1000 kidd’s in one  day.Turtle can be all color like blue,pink,green and red.Turtle can be in water for along time.

           Master chef 2017

           L.G  Use  adverbs

Monday the 11 of september 2017.It was a great day for masterchef.Room6 cooked up food for their parents.They always washed their hands before they cooked And the quickly decorated their table.All the groups had sell 20 tickets.One group sold 21 tickets.The food was great only one 15 tickets.                                                                                                                        

               

                                    L.G Descriptive.

                 S.O.S adjectives.

I see six people with six monkey  in the pacific forest.One of the monkey went to get a banana to eat.For people went with the one monkey to see he.

   

                     Sport

L.G use fs+cl

My  sport team went to christchurch.To play a game.But i had to go kaponga to play a game.My dad win in christchurch.But i went to christchurch. And dad looked at karlos.Alice looked at dad.And the car crash into a tree we had to walk home.

L.G.Use adjectives

Once  upon time a girl name was alice live in a blue house in the forest.Alice looked at the blue sky.’’Alice yelled,’’at the prince. She was walking in the forest and she fall in a tiny hole and cried.A prince helped Alice out of  the tiny little green hole. And the end.

By.Destany